The Gentle Quantum Physics Of An Early Evening's Rain

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Open Poetry #28

The Gentle Quantum Physics Of An Early Evening's Rain

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2003-09-01 10:05 PM

Walking all alone
in this dark foreboding rain
I crave partnership

knowing my choices
makes this hopelessness feel pure
washed free of desire

I am here and there
and at the same time nowhere
undeniably

©2003 by icebox

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2003-09-01 10:27 PM

"I am here and there
and at the same time nowhere
undeniably"

God Ice, this was so real! And the titles always draw me in. Where do you get them from m'friend?

Wonderful write!

Tima

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-09-02 12:03 PM

Ice you are always touching me in one way or another.You always come up with the best things and make them feel reality.

Crystal

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-09-02 12:50 PM

"The Gentle Quantum Physics Of An Early Evening's Rain"

I am the lost spirit walking along side of you...and it doesn't feel gentle..

Susan

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-09-02 03:00 AM

The titles you write are poetry alone..
The excitement is in the body..

or technically, your giving of thought..

Love everything you write, Ice.. really.

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