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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-09-01 11:02 AM


While martins still play chase,and floating white clouds like flying icebergs, huge and vast passing slowly in the cloudy sky, autumn's approach i can already feel.

Lapwings gather and fly fifty to a group,their breeding pairs finnished for the season, land on harvested fields, alongside strutting pheasants, autumn has started for real.

Colder winds came overnight,now the leaves still green,begin to cover the ground, and blow in sudden chill breeze.
Jays hurriedly bury acorns in caches, stored for the winter.

Willow warblers still call, ready for the long trip to Africa, while swallows swerve slowly through the air with agility.
The sun glows and slowly drops, growing fainter and fainter.

Mist begins to shroud the land, frost smothers the ground through the night and early morning,the magical realm slowly begins to take shape, gradualy.

Stars shine down from the heavens, planets glow in the deep blue dark of midnight.
Huge and without end,eternal the cosmos stretches, autumn nights so heavenly.

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-09-01 11:11 AM


I could read your descriptive writing forevermore!


EA

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-01 11:16 AM


terrifically penned,,,

         


Goldenrose
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3 posted 2003-09-01 11:19 AM


Thank you earth angel and QJQ for your kind replies..

Goldenrose.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2003-09-01 10:37 PM


My love you have a gift, you use your gift wisely, all the life of the earth comes into a sharp view, opening our eyes to see detail, magic, life so natural, so free.

So it is that your heart in love, posesses
the same characteristics....detail, natural, free..and full of magic!

Artist paint with a brush..but you my love paint with your heart...your love of nature is displayed upon the canvas of our minds..

I love how you open my eyes to see more...always taking me a step more..
keep letting me see the world through the eyes of your heart!

xxxxxx~love Lady love of The forest

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-02-2003 04:20 AM).]

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-09-01 11:57 PM


You always draw the reader from within.You are full of such insight that it touches the heart's of many.
Crystal

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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6 posted 2003-09-02 12:33 PM


Phil . . .

yes, I love autumn too just this part I despise:

Colder winds came overnight,now the leaves still green,begin to cover the ground, and blow in sudden chill breeze.

beautiful scene you painted, m'friend
xxoo

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