Open Poetry #28 |
Autumn Signs. |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
While martins still play chase,and floating white clouds like flying icebergs, huge and vast passing slowly in the cloudy sky, autumn's approach i can already feel. Lapwings gather and fly fifty to a group,their breeding pairs finnished for the season, land on harvested fields, alongside strutting pheasants, autumn has started for real. Colder winds came overnight,now the leaves still green,begin to cover the ground, and blow in sudden chill breeze. Jays hurriedly bury acorns in caches, stored for the winter. Willow warblers still call, ready for the long trip to Africa, while swallows swerve slowly through the air with agility. The sun glows and slowly drops, growing fainter and fainter. Mist begins to shroud the land, frost smothers the ground through the night and early morning,the magical realm slowly begins to take shape, gradualy. Stars shine down from the heavens, planets glow in the deep blue dark of midnight. Huge and without end,eternal the cosmos stretches, autumn nights so heavenly. |
||
© Copyright 2003 P.D - All Rights Reserved | |||
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I could read your descriptive writing forevermore! EA |
||
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrifically penned,,, |
||
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Thank you earth angel and QJQ for your kind replies.. Goldenrose. |
||
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
My love you have a gift, you use your gift wisely, all the life of the earth comes into a sharp view, opening our eyes to see detail, magic, life so natural, so free. So it is that your heart in love, posesses the same characteristics....detail, natural, free..and full of magic! Artist paint with a brush..but you my love paint with your heart...your love of nature is displayed upon the canvas of our minds.. I love how you open my eyes to see more...always taking me a step more.. keep letting me see the world through the eyes of your heart! xxxxxx~love Lady love of The forest [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (09-02-2003 04:20 AM).] |
||
angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You always draw the reader from within.You are full of such insight that it touches the heart's of many. Crystal |
||
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Phil . . . yes, I love autumn too just this part I despise: Colder winds came overnight,now the leaves still green,begin to cover the ground, and blow in sudden chill breeze. beautiful scene you painted, m'friend xxoo |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |