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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-09-01 08:06 AM

Treasure Trove

I looked and saw a treasure trove
In the spirit of a rove and
It only spilled the edge in fluff
A thousand poems are not enough.

It’s the main sail I wish to bellow
Nice and taught and full and mellow
To split the waters froth and spray
To leap my ship upon its way

To race the skies fandango ply
And pace the speed to egos fly
To scent the shoal and walk in rhyme
The effervescent spill of time.

I grow to near the end of wait
And don’t believe eternals eight
I would to touch the dove above
And join with her this one of love.

It is my only wish of choice
Her whisper and her touch of voice

Kit McCallum

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1 posted 2003-09-01 08:10 AM

"To scent the shoal and walk in rhyme
The effervescent spill of time."

Beuatiful visuals and rhymes to tickle my mind this morning. Thank you sweet Sy!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-09-01 08:14 AM

Kit,
Thank you love.

Patricia
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Missouri

3 posted 2003-09-01 08:33 AM

I read this several times, Seymour. Just lovely. I saw myself in your flight of verse. What a lovely way to start this morning. I think I will hold your images with me throughout the day.

Patricia

QjQ
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4 posted 2003-09-01 08:36 AM

It is my only wish of choice
Her whisper and her touch of voice

fabulous penning,, Sir Poet,,,

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-09-01 08:42 AM

Patricia,
You are sweet, thank you.

QjQ
You are very kind, thank you.

Nan

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6 posted 2003-09-01 08:50 AM

May all of your "wishes of choice" come true, Sy - You're the best...

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-09-01 09:39 AM

Good morning, Sir Tumbleweed!

"It’s the main sail I wish to bellow
Nice and taught and full and mellow
To split the waters froth and spray
To leap my ship upon its way"

~ This is a captivating visual! You at the helm with sea spray in your face forging forth across the open seas...

A poem full of spirit and freedom! I thoroughly enjoyed this reading experience!

Lovin' hugs 'n appreciative smiles,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2003-09-01 09:54 AM

Nan
And you're a love.

Earth Angel
And you in confide to whisper and hide. LOL

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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9 posted 2003-09-01 10:14 AM

SY:

this is lovely, you know I adore wings:

I would to touch the dove above
And join with her this one of love.

It is my only wish of choice
Her whisper and her touch of voice

just heaven . . .
xxoo

Nightshade

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just out of reach

10 posted 2003-09-01 10:34 AM

Beautiful write on this Labour Day morn Seymour. Thankyou for this. I have English Breakfast Tea and cinnamon buns ready. Hopefully Enchantress will return soon with her "specialty" teas. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
Emily Dickinson

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2003-09-01 11:09 AM

Seymour~

'To race the skies fandango ply'

Do you know how beautiful this is ?
VERY~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2003-09-01 11:53 AM

littlewing
Thank you sweet.

Chris,
Thank you dear I'll be right there.

Marge,
Yes almost as pretty as you.

Martie

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13 posted 2003-09-01 01:54 PM

Sy

You are the captain of the ship Fandango!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2003-09-01 02:23 PM

Martie
And you are the wind that bellows my sails.

Suetang
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15 posted 2003-09-01 08:53 PM

Hello Seymour

This was indeed a real gem.

"A poet weaves his words
through each verse to create
a most beautiful tapestry
for us all to admire."

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2003-09-01 09:38 PM

Suetang
Thank you so much for the nice reply.

angelblueyes
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17 posted 2003-09-02 12:35 PM

This is absolutely beautiful and I wish that all your wishes come true.For a man with the spirit of a stallion, the dance of a lover, and the fire of a song only deserves the best

Crystal

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

18 posted 2003-09-02 07:24 AM

Crystal
You are a love.

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