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Open Poetry #28

our own abyss

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-08-30 12:45 PM

Invitations
the trees moved
a welcome
transparent but viscous
weaving the soundless
undercurrents brought
they knew I had come
waiting
as the still cold
insisted
like shimmer listings
sought and made
calling for the day
my walk
to travel our own
mind
our own abyss

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-08-30 02:05 PM

I tried to pick a line, that stood out for me, but honestly, every single one does....

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-08-30 03:14 PM

mystic, fantastic writing. beautiful flow and imagery throughout great work

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-08-30 06:02 PM

poe, mann this reminded me of a journey within my own head . . . scary
awesome writing
xxoo

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