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Will you cry, when you get home?
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Will you cry, when you get home? |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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I see it in her face, annoyed, yet sympathetic whilst she watches me talking, probably not listening She hates the bitter i wear emblazoned across my words and the hopeless face that turns away to kissing in the street I once told her, what she now wants to tell me; love exists, is worth every bump and scratch it WILL find you but fails to remind me Perhaps because she knows what I live is yet to come for her and? because she is adamant she will never find it The way she knows me so well, dropping me outside the well lit home I dwell another normal day, nothing new, no major drama still she asks; Will you cry? when you get in? "No" lying and truth telling at the same time I never stop crying inside . . Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A stake of heart well-done. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Wow I wonder how many people this echoes through in their lives. WOW..this choked me up. You know how to put the words out there that go right for the juggler...well I guess that's a bit morbid, but I'm sure you know what I mean. Painful write.  SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I never stop crying inside  dont let him see, not anymore |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gemma~ Such a tender emote from within~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gem, this is just over flowing.. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
we all are. or screaming. I like screaming better  And Gem? this is heartwrenching. I love it because what it is, but I love it even more because it is you.insanity is not a crime |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
uh huh....into my library... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
""No" lying and truth telling at the same time I never stop crying inside" OUCH! Dang that hurts, but still I must add on a big WOW. Powerful write here, dear Lady. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Yes. Most definitely. This is going straight into my library... Great write. Liz xx "Gorge the honey from life, and live through the stomach aches knowing they will pass..." ~Liz Pinard 2003~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
another flawless gem in a 24 karat setting of words.. shalom |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"Will you cry? when you get in? "No" lying and truth telling at the same time I never stop crying inside" OMG! Those words reached deep inside my heart and pulled the strings that hold it in place. I don't know the exact meaning for you my sweet friend, but for me, I wish that I had been given the chance to read this in another time and place. It would have answered many questions for me. This one takes a seat in the library! Absolutely beautiful! -Tima A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life, to be thankful for a good one. |
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ljossberir Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 81Ny, USA |
You got a tear from me (though I admit i'm easy prey) What stood out to me are those last few lines, they were beautiful and POWERful, it was like the majority of the piece was a string and at the end was the hook! :: note to self - add to library:: |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Will you cry? when you get in? "No" lying and truth telling at the same time I never stop crying inside  Gemma, I'm keeping a lot of your poems...justlike this one.  Good writing, my friend. Hugs and love to you Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gem; this is priceless . . . as are your tears, inside and out xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I never stop crying inside aye....aye *shakes his head |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I never stop crying inside"  Susan |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Mark this one down as another excellent poem from your pen... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that definitely says it all, Gem hugs M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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