I am your father...Luke...

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Open Poetry #28

I am your father...Luke...

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-08-29 05:14 PM

Even as I start to give in,
the darkling offers so much peace,...
I mean, who would not like to live with two extremely friendly
best friends
who both where as madly
in love with me
as they where with each other?
I realize that though I am almost as polluted as my parents,
someone in the gene pool cursed me with sense and a conscious,
And I do not have it in me,
to deliver the same amount of pain,
that I have recieved,
just out of the malice of knowing,
that some may disserve my ire,
I know that the someone who draws out my revenge, can never be someone I love,
so I remain a failure,
at both getting it right,
and getting it wrong.

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (08-29-2003 05:17 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-08-29 05:15 PM

Jason - excellent write of your inner thoughts...

BC

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2003-08-29 07:53 PM

"I know that the someone who draws out my revenge, can never be someone I love,
so I remain a failure,
at both getting it right,
and getting it wrong."

Ohhh, I loved those few lines Jason!

What a great write my friend.

Tima

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