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Repartee
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repartee In the lace of repartee Lies a pace of subtlety It flutters in and out the words Like little curds or flying birds. For the most part they float on bye But once or twice they catch your eye And when they do initiate The mind will call for satiate Symbols weaving given claim And subtlety there clothe of game And spirit is their mantle cloth And simmer is their source of sloth Smoldering in fires pique Stabbing with a blade of meek They eat away in undertow Bludgeon you in phantoms blow They are an under currents wend A means of gaining subtle end |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Smoldering in fires pique Stabbing with a blade of meek They eat away in undertow Bludgeon you in phantoms blow" Loved this, phantoms is a strong word to me, for some odd reason.. this poem holds something. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nicely done sigh......I thought it was going to be about a party Toe went to and still couldn't get drunk...so he went to another one the following night..."Re-party?".....good job pal...as always |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good Morning, wishing you a lovely day and grand weekend ahead.... Your poetry intoxicates...the rhyme is extremely brilliant....smiles and hugs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Your smiles and hugs are treasures to me. Thank you.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kaoru If it holds your interest for a moment I am happy. Toe, Thank you my friend you always surprise me. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy pulled Toe in for the repartee... works for me! So does this poem...thank you Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you love. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sy you caught the eye of me with your wonderful poetry of repartee Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS Thank you my dear. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Seymour once again you've outdid yourself beautiful poem. take care Rose |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Symbols weaving given claim And subtlety there clothe of game a rhyme wizard...that you are *s M |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
wonderful job!!! Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Symbols weaving given claim And subtlety there clothe of game And spirit is their mantle cloth And simmer is their source of sloth Smoldering in fires pique Stabbing with a blade of meek They eat away in undertow Bludgeon you in phantoms blow They are an under currents wend A means of gaining subtle end ========================= Your symbolism and vocabulary in this is cooler than a mere moth has words for. You wear a coat woven from cloth of way cool my oh so wise Poet. Hope you and Randy have a relaxing long holiday weekend Stinky... Weather allowing I may take a road trip over the weekend..so no worries if the moth is missing. I sent an Enote telling you the pic arrived..I hope you got it...emails have been somewhat unreliable of late...must be that randy worm virus LOL love ya Sy-babes.. tell Issy I said hello     You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name ... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "Smoldering in fires pique Stabbing with a blade of meek They eat away in undertow Bludgeon you in phantoms blow" I think you got repartee nailed! and a few other things as well.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rose, Thank you my dear and you are a dear. Maureen, Just read you poem and it's one of your best. Kristie, Thanks for the wonderful. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You have flattered me into the sky And now I am a butterfly. I'll look for your Email. WWRS Martie, And I think you got me nailed. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
In the lace of repartee Lies a pace of subtlety It flutters in and out the words Like little curds or flying birds. For the most part they float on bye But once or twice they catch your eye And when they do initiate The mind will call for satiate Seymour, I thoroughly enjoyed, as always. Thank you sweet friend. Hugs to you this morning  Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
SY, you've done it again.You are such a brilliant wizard of rhymes and words.It jumps right off the page and into the reader to pull them in. Crystal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel You are a sweet heart. Crystal, That sounds good to me, thank you. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice penning n read,,, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
QjQ Thank you for the read and comment. |
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