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Silent Night
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Silent Night |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silent Night When I was a young boy I watched a shooting star. As it traveled through a silent night I watched it from afar. To my eyes it was simply beautiful to behold. Still I yearned to touch it, its beauty to unfold. Tonight, as I look upon her face, I feel like a young boy staring beauty in the face, a young boy yearning to see her beauty unfolding in silky layers of grace. JamesLee August25 2003 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a lovely weave of the feelings of love oh to simply gaze upon the face of that one, that special most significant part of my self to whom the Gods gave a mysterious song called attraction.... Lovely poem my friend |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, James. I enjoyed reading it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmmmm |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
so passionate, your writing seem to getting more and more from the heart, which really opens all the avenues of romance. Great job Rose |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely JamesM...I am not sure why new love at a later stage in life makes one feel like a teenager...but it is a wonderful feeling, even if fleeting. M |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
"staring beauty in the face, a young boy yearning to see her beauty unfolding in silky layers of grace." I love that image. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
nice comparison... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
mmmmm such sweetness.You bring the smiles from within.  Crystal |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
James - grace is with this romantic write... BC |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Lovely and so tender. Bon-Bon  |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
James...This should be given to that special someone. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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