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D'sWhisper Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 68Washington, USA |
Just a bit weary. Scanning scripted emotions, Creations chronicle of an ineffable recital, Just a bit weary. A poem inspired by my old poetry..the old feelings gone all but for a few words scribbled down on notebook paper. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it happens like that sometimes love the poem, it has a certain sadness about it |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
It does have a certain cover of sadness.. "Just a bit weary. Quiet and smoothly, Casting away words." Beautiful. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is beautiful, my friend, and takes on a real special significance as I read. Recently I found old writings of my own, and realized that the passion is still inside, only stronger with age...so thank you for this lovely work...  Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is the way it really is sometimes, isn't it?  Hugs  Ethel |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
reminds me of finding an old book of my grandmother's in the attic. aged, but sweet and special. Memories.... Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
but the old words forge a rested virtue of new words my friend...bittersweet right/write, but keeping the faith... |
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