Open Poetry #28 |
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Out the Door of Listening |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
The door to music breeze touches the tops of trees to hear is a joy Dragonfly in air dip and turn above the pool messenger of love Next a butterfly wings like red hair without dye same as dragonfly In the summer sky messages beneath the sun listening with heart [This message has been edited by Martie (08-28-2003 03:14 PM).] |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, these are lovely... just what I needed for my non-lunch! *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Only a special ear can hear the dragonfly... of course, your hearing qualifies, every time. Smiling with you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Next a butterfly like red hair with dye same as dragonfly Hiya Martie, beautiful poetry in motion Like red hair with dye...that part made me blush...cause that's me...always trying to cover up the red along with the grey...hehehhehe have a wonderful day and many thanks for sharing |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Martie... ![]() "My friends are my estate." |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You are wise....in every sense of the word. Each of these links is beautiful in itself, and together they are exquisite...beauty and wisdom, form and substance, bound together. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Sweet and beautiful Martie. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSis~ Just luberly~ ![]() *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
One morning, in wet mosquito country, I was with a group of riflemen. The mosquito population was ravenous. Suddenly, thousands of dragonflies floated out of the tree line and began feeding on the mosquitoes. This gave us relief from the mosquitoes, but what was really wonderful was to watch this group of heavily armed men stop and stand in awe at the beauty of the sunlight moving through and reflecting off the translucent wings of the thousands of dragonflies. The real magic of the moment was that though we were in a completely exposed position, we stood there for several minutes until the mosquitoes flew off with the dragonflies in pursuit and no human was harmed. Later, of course, several people commented on what a dumb thing we had done...but no one really believed it. *smile* I had forgotten that memory, that moment of beauty in a landscape of ugliness. Thank you! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Martie's poetry ... words upon butterfly wings to read is a gift ![]() ![]() You're going to hear my voice in the morning calling your name ... |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
four pearls strung on this necklace each to be contemplated alone... or together and it looks splendid on you haiku very much! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such clarity, when we hear with the heart my friend. Enjoyed this very much. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smiling warmly |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Such beauty in all these Martie. hugs Maree ![]() fate is not just |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
I listened and I heard the way you say it...and it is so very well done - Paul |
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