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Martie

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0 posted 2003-08-31 03:40 PM

Dancing With My Piano

Slow steps around we dance
The floor etched like a record
With the steps we take to be together
Cobwebbed and perfumed
Corners and rooms of wood and glass

Shhhh darling know the song will last
The music ends but the breath is long
Even across the miles of time
the reverie like candle burns
We blow the past that age inspires
With each the other draw out fire

The melody is all around us
sometimes quiet as the morning
Webs spun of purest light
throughout the night then into dew
Listen how we play it right
I’m singing this song to you

[This message has been edited by Martie (08-31-2003 03:57 PM).]

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-08-31 03:43 PM

Martie - I knew one day you would play that piano and sing me a song. I love your title to this...

BC

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-08-31 04:18 PM

The music ends but the breath is long
Even across the miles of time

lovely lines...a mutual friend use to write about music and love all the time...missing him

hugsss
M

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-08-31 04:20 PM

I absolutely love this.I cna hear the music in my head and feel the beat to which it moves.

Crystal

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-08-31 04:30 PM

Martie...this absolutely IS a song...and you sing it beautifully.

Love this...love YOU..
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

5 posted 2003-08-31 04:49 PM

"Shhhh darling know the song will last
The music ends but the breath is long..."

*smile*

Thank you for sharing this here!

Ratleader

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6 posted 2003-08-31 04:59 PM

I wish I could tell you how sweet this song is to me right now..... just two, making their own music, nothing but the song of their togetherness. What a beautiful scene, and what a beautiful poem.....

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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-08-31 05:11 PM

I will always listen
to your piano music...

Marge Tindal

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8 posted 2003-08-31 06:09 PM

SweetSis~

'The melody is all around us
sometimes quiet as the morning
Webs spun of purest light
throughout the night then into dew'

I simply *sigh*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Goodknight
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Ohio, USA

9 posted 2003-09-02 08:07 PM

I loved the dance and the music - you write so magically - Paul

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