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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-27 11:31 PM

Shading my doorway
with bitter gray

envious green
stood in the way
of the next in line

who will
remember
their name
when their
number
is called?

Skipping queue
bracing for impact

of a thousand eyes
caving me backwards

where I belong
with you
in this bitter
grey
of dust storm
war
.
.
.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-08-27 11:33 PM

You are another that makes me think

I love the imagery and colors you use.Well done.
Crystal

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
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2 posted 2003-08-28 01:13 AM

Hey Gemma

Where have you been, little lady? I've missed you.
This is a good write, as always.
Take care of yourself.
Hugs and love,

Ethel Mae

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-08-28 01:58 AM

Oi, this is what you were complainin about? I see nothing wrong with this your muse is with you mine is still AWOL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

4 posted 2003-08-28 03:39 AM

yeah....I know

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-08-28 03:42 AM

gem:
priceless stanza

who will
remember
their name
when their
number
is called?

loved the envy too
always got me thinking here you do
xxoo

timothysangel1973

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Never close enough

6 posted 2003-08-29 11:03 PM

You are amazing, and I am never let down when I choose to read your words!

You are a "Gem"

)))hugs(((

Tima

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-08-29 11:19 PM

that envious green can get you every time...

hugss gem
M

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-08-30 07:34 AM

thanks for the undeserved replies. i wrote this at about 5.30 am, i think i was delerious. I don't like it.

but thankyou anyway.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2003-08-30 10:39 AM

Beautiful.
Eric

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