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Sand is like sadness, it never goes away..
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Sand is like sadness, it never goes away.. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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ringlet my finger slips right through a tickled touch embraces my wrist.. this is what i have forgotten this is what i chose to blow away a brief explanation.. i recall the time when a kiss could make it go away.. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very excellently penned,, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"i recall the time when a kiss could make it go away.." Me too... Beautifully said, Meghan. Hugs to you...  "My friends are my estate." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
me too I always relate to you Meg |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ouch. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
A kiss...yes a long time ago, when I was still married a kiss did it...then over time and so many mistakes...the kiss didn't work anymore....bitterness was what was left....so sad. Anyway....I enjoyed your words and thoughts as always. Susan |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I came back because as I hit "submit" I thought... "How does one so young get so much insight?" Thought I would share that thought. Susan |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a kiss... what's that? you are so intense...I love to read you M |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
We're so alike, and yet so different that it's funny.....  I'm amazed yet again.  Kielo I'll never forget you.... I know that much, despite my foolishness. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kaoru - your thoughts are well written... BC |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write Meg The title lured me in, and then your wonderfully woven words kept there! )))hugs((( Tima |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
 It won't work, but have one anyway. this ached my bones lady. knowing this well. how do you keep doing this? you never fail to amaze. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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