The New Moon's Requiem For A Common Man

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Open Poetry #28

The New Moon's Requiem For A Common Man

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2003-08-27 10:11 PM

every month the thoughts
for seeking supplication
unveil in moonlight

showing nothing more
than patience while I'm dying
celebrate your life

when I've shed these chains
my soul will walk beside you
turning grief to joy

©2003 by icebox

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2003-08-27 10:16 PM

icebox...so deep and tender is your place of poetic thought. I'm glad.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-08-27 10:26 PM

I have to agree with Martie.Your writes are filled with tenderness, beauty,and even when dark they are what's within you

Crystal

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-08-27 10:59 PM

while you write from the shadows, you are of the galaxies...keeping this one...~K~

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-08-27 11:03 PM

I sincerely hope you are right...

Susan

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-08-27 11:19 PM

Wow!! How do you do that? Seeming to be miles away, but so close it's as if you are here right beside all of us, these wandering souls, to help heal, but asking nothing in return. AMAZING!!! Just beautiful!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-08-30 06:33 AM

A keeper.

so touching, back to the top with this.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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