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bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2003-08-23 01:32 PM

yes_no_yes

yes it hurt when it was over
yes depression set in
yes was angry at me
yes was angry at you
yes hurt more than us
yes I made mistakes
yes so did you

no can not take back
no the future is set
no can not change the past
no things will not get better
no you do not understand

yes life is going on
yes your not involved
yes my life has changed
yes she’s better than you
yes she’s better than me
yes is what she said…..
.
.
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bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-08-23 02:26 PM

looks as if it's ending on a positive note

Janette

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since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

2 posted 2003-08-23 07:23 PM

YES works for me ... everytime.

Enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-08-23 10:47 PM

Hi Bernie

I'm glad that it ended with "yes"
instead of "no".

Hugs

Ethel

DarlingDeb
New Member

since 2003-08-28

Posts 9
Harriman, Tn

4 posted 2003-08-29 09:23 AM

Love it! It is good to move forward and looks like the with the answer of "Yes", a happier life awaits.

Deb

Everyone has a "Special Angel" watching over them each day!

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

5 posted 2003-08-29 10:28 AM

Yesssss...that's exactly how it is!

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-08-29 11:03 AM

I like the way this ended.
Crystal

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2003-08-30 02:28 AM

yes this was a great poem....been here and done that...

~ARH

Bec
Member

since 2001-02-23

Posts 475
Canberra

8 posted 2003-08-30 06:32 AM

Hi bslicker...

Glad to see that the last few "yes" were good ones!

However, I especially liked the "no"...

"no can not take back
no the future is set
no can not change the past
no things will not get better
no you do not understand"

To me it seems to reaffirm that you're doing the right thing.

Bec

"Now, Harry you must know all about Muggles, tell me, what exactly is the function of a rubber duck?" ~ Arthur Weasley

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