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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-27 12:38 PM

In a bolt of white
I see your face again..

I dance barefoot in snow,
waiting.
Watching through covered pine..
the stars shine brighter here
than anywhere I've tread.

I want to walk and make
no footprints at all.

Weightless my misery
judges me,
endlessly.

I catch the sky as blanket and
breathe in the ocean..

Oh
Goddess you have
paid me well with
such beauty, if only,
everyone else could see
through my
ice blue eyes..

Though I've carried burdens,
though collected scars I
will touch upon this petal
day by day and
watch the sadness
melt away
as the seasons change.

I will wrap and tangle my
heart in daisy chain
kiss the soul of fawn and
let him freely run away..

This death is madness and
I regret the hook of
cycle created..
Yet I hope to see
life change..

The highway bleeds of
sacrifice ..
I will give life, oh root,
I will replace..

I will thank.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-08-27 12:51 PM

"Weightless my misery
judges me,
endlessly."

dear dear oh my dear...helen

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2003-08-27 02:13 AM

I find a certain joy of life in this poem, an image of the great Mother changing through all seasons, death, rebirth, renewal. This is wonderfully written, and I love the smoothness of transition here...Bravo!!!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-08-27 02:14 AM

Meg,

in an extremely short time I have watched you bloom . . . this is a brilliant piece

if only,
everyone else could see
through my
ice blue eyes..

If only . . . *shaking head*
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-08-27 03:56 AM

drifting off into a mood...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-08-27 07:20 AM

Though I've carried burdens,
though collected scars I
will touch upon this petal
day by day and
watch the sadness
melt away
as the seasons change.

And this is what it's all about...isn't it. Your words are not only healing but filled with the reality and joy of life. Thank you

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

6 posted 2003-08-27 12:12 PM

Positively pagan -- and I mean that as a high compliment. Nothing is quite as beautiful as tuning into nature's frequency and appreciating it.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

7 posted 2003-08-27 12:40 PM

It is all here . . .
to quote you:

"I see
endlessly
day by day
life change.

I will replace."

[This message has been edited by wandering glider (08-27-2003 07:03 PM).]

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

8 posted 2003-08-27 01:03 PM

It really is too bad that people can't see through eyes that *aren't* theirs. If they could see through the others eyes their perception would no longer be tainted by what they are, but would be percieved by what you are in purest form. No taint. WOW is all I can really think to say...except this....this is full of

Beautiful!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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