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the rose |
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magdalena New Member
since 2003-08-07
Posts 1New Hampshire |
my lip quivers in anticipation as the rose petal falls to the ground i bend over and pick it up i smell the sweet elegance of desire slowly i glide the rose petal across my naked heated body so soft like those days of bliss in which you loved this rose now im alone in a garden of oppurtunity yet it is the rose that we once held in my trembling hand a tear rolls down my eager face i sit and i wait for you to hold this rose once again |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Passions, Magdalena. Enjoyed your soft, yet sensual first post. Love, Margherita  |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Words of yearning. So sad.. :'( SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful, nicely expressed, welcome |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Looks like you have come to the right place. Welcome to Passions! s.a.g. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Magdalena, Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed your first post!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A senual treat...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is a somewhat sad but very beautiful and passionate debut, sweet friend, fear not, the rose will caress your heart and this time the thorns won't prick at it! This is gorgeous, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Magdalena, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fantastic poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magdalena, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Magdelena . . . this is absolute bittersweet beauty perfection Welcome to PIP! Amazing entrance you will have an impact for sure xxoo |
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