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TWENTY OR LESS…#156

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-08-26 01:10 AM

TWENTY OR LESS…#156

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon

suspended

in this collision between

memories
and
over

nothing devours self
quite as

returning
to
the
end

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-08-26 01:16 AM

you're excellent at these! I thoroughly enjoy.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-08-26 01:17 AM

"nothing devours self
quite as

returning
to
the
end"

indeed...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2003-08-26 10:05 AM

great impact from so few words, Mark

sometimes the completeness
of the circle
leaves me wanting
a different ending point

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-08-26 02:58 PM

stunning observation...thank you for writing and sharing

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-08-26 04:46 PM

Excellent write!
Eric

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

6 posted 2003-08-26 04:52 PM

nice read

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-08-26 05:02 PM

MARK,
Good one enjoyed.

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