Open Poetry #28 |
Sir Knight of Time |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~~Sir Knight of Time~~ The renaissance returns its glow The mystified in chance to know. Dressed in past to dance the times Producing memories in rhymes. The Lady, she, returns to press Ollyne's words in tune, profess Her knight of new, her days of fine To capture he, and share the dine. Receptions warm, the air suspense The crowning of perfection, hence, She who peels and sheds her grace For he alone, will fair in face. Displaying timely passions quest, Her time is now, in Ollyne's best. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-04-2003 10:37 AM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I eat this stuff up! I swear....library I must say!!! Enjoyed Obviously If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This one's going into the library.WOW!!!!!Lady angelblueyes |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you both..but just in case you don't understand it..I work the Maryland Renaissance Festival each year and it is coming in the next few weekends. I dress the time period and enjoy the atmosphere. I write as Lady Ollyne when the mood strikes and especially after each weekend. So she has many poems listed in the search in the archives...if you want to read her. thank you both, Maureen |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
For real...yanno I've always wanted to go to the Renaissance festival it's near crownsville right?? *shrugs* and I have read Lady Ollyne adore it as well *bumps this* If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
beautiful writing Maureen....thank you for the words... Goldenrose. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - I remember her very well... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem appeals to me very much. You are a very versatile poetess! Congratulations on your 9,000 posts! Take a peek at Announcements! EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Ceinwyn, yes it is in Crownsville, past the State Hospital...if you come, try stopping by Her Majesties Healers...you may find me there. Thank you for the bump. Maureen Goldenrose, thank you for stopping by and leaving your touch M JamesM, thank you hugss Bill Charles, and I believe you do...Thanks BC, I can always count on you. Earth Angel, thanks a lot. I read over there. I just haven't had the time to thank you and anyone else. But I was surprised. M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maureen you brought me back to days of battles and romance . . . This is beautiful xxoo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
If you have never gone to a Renaissance Festival or Faire I suggest you go..they are fun and the costumes are lovely. hugs and thanks M |
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RunningWolf Junior Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 24Michigan USA |
i like this poem. it reminds me of the first time i ever saw a ren faire in the making on pbs television. someday i hope to participate in one. keep the middle ages alive in words and re enactments. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - my lady will you always be in time... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done M. The Ren. Faire sounds very interesting and I do believe that some of the costumes are quite a sight to see. thanx for sharing this. |
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