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Corinne
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0 posted 2003-08-25 03:16 PM



Cross-Cross


Two will stand apart
until one crosses over the other.
In wrapped caress then,
they are pulled
together.

A ballet of loops,
infinite in direction,
quick and agilely
performed

and presto!

a child learns to tie
his shoes.
© 2003 Core

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1 posted 2003-08-25 03:20 PM



As simple as that.  And in this simplicity, I have to sigh...and realize that Velcro has taken over the act of manipulating the first task in life...the simple act

of tying one's shoes.

Corinne
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2 posted 2003-08-25 03:23 PM


Yes, exactly, Sunshine! It is the milestone of one of the first grown up tasks. Thought of this while I was volunteering in my daughter's class this morning and noticed her perpetually untied shoes. Sigh. She knows how, just doesn't give a hoot.


Thanks!

Core

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3 posted 2003-08-25 03:36 PM


I can remember my father's large hands, manipulating my little fingers up and over, around and through, and this is how we tie our shoes...

and now I do the same with my grandchildren.  When they're not wearing velcroed anythings...

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4 posted 2003-08-25 03:48 PM


Corrine, isn't it odd how things change? Learning to tie one's own shoes used to be one of the first things children were so proud of. Now, most of them have the velcro thingys, no shoe strings. A good poem, lady.
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5 posted 2003-08-25 06:41 PM


I love it - How cute!!.... Now let's see one about learning to put their coats on...
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6 posted 2003-08-25 07:59 PM


Only you could make tying a shoe poetry in motion
Corinne
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7 posted 2003-08-26 09:56 AM


Thank you Sunshine, Garysgirl, Nan and Ruth!


Cor

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