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Misty Blue And Hazy
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Misty Blue And Hazy |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Misty Blue And Hazy Just having downtime Felt depressingly sad Able to keep my sanity Well the little I had The depths of despair Not quite on the brink Felt lowness of spirits Disenchanted I sink Blue setting the tone In melancholy mood By worrying anxiously Doldrums I brood Within the emptiness Of me missing you Heart feels neglected I thought you knew The tunnel darkened Misty blue and hazy A spark I'm awaiting I'm not totally crazy Hope©2003 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
no your not and never will you be! Your writes are astounding my friend....thank you for sharing. |
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Suede Junior Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 38Drifting on the soul |
Beautiful, simply |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wow Lee , your kind reply is so much appreciated Hope |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
hey Suede I am so pleased you think so , I do thank you for your kind reply Hope |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Within the emptiness Of me missing you Heart feels neglected I thought you knew Isn't it sad, Hope? I know I went through this a few months ago. He had know idea how much he meant to me and how I missed him. We reconnected, but alas, it seems we were not meant to be. The story does end now for me...Now I do not wonder what we could be. Seems you are inspiring rhymes. (smiling) I love your writing for I do see myself often in your words...which makes me take a second look at it all. With introspect, we oftentimes find our strength. A sad but wonderful write, Patricia |
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