I let my mind flutter for moments.. I'd share them with you..

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-25 04:03 AM

Yes, there is fear
within open eyes.

So I close them..

I embrace blindness.

Although it causes me
to miss

the doves who nest
on the ground and the
preditorial aspect of
these fluttering things
we love..

oh
the tails are twitching.

I saw this thing
it's last breath..
I cupped life in my hands,
if it were only as easy as
lending breath..

In the mouth of
my garden a secret
just waits to be uttered..

something bound in magical wire

something
made
me this way..someone

crossed my stars right out and

i heave my tongue into my
lungs so that not only
would I be blind but also
I could no longer speak..

Using signals and scents to make my way
along the
shrine of datura..

a poison well
we drink the very existance.

should we touch upon youth,
we'd never learn with age..

Amazing how these things work,
i perspire with loving rage..

Must the ground seem so close as
I'm falling?

I never once admitted in my belief..

So I stumble 'cross doves and I
let them feather
around my feet..
All unknowing of whether they've grown
black, bleak..and void
of divinity..

if the young survived..

I am one of many..
who has found
stength in the weak.

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-08-25 04:16 AM

There is much to be learned from the weak creatures in life...if we open our eyes. This reminded me to do just that, and take a better look at the world around me...thank you, and this is a lovely writing! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-08-25 04:16 AM

I'm in awe

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-08-25 05:01 AM

I am one of many..
who has found
stength in the weak.

terrific literary genre,

timothysangel1973

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since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

4 posted 2003-08-25 06:35 AM

Worderful write Kaoru!

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2003-08-25 08:04 AM

Sometimes the simpliest things ....

                     hides weakness
                     can be left unsaid
                     gives us the most pleasure
                     can make us think

                     leave us wanting more ...

      ... and perspire love's rage!!

          Blindingly beautiful - ALWAYS

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-08-25 11:51 AM

I know this

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-08-25 01:12 PM

Meg, this is the best I have read from you,
every line perfection, each thought embedded and the imagery astounding

i heave my tongue into my
lungs so that not only
would I be blind but also
I could no longer speak..

amazing stanza
excellent write
xxoo

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-08-25 01:21 PM

Very good...

lucky
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since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

9 posted 2003-08-25 01:49 PM

must the ground seem so close as I'm
falling..? - better to be close than far
away... to much time to think about the
fall... as a Gin drinker once said... I love
flying, I just hate the landing. keep your
feet in the garden K.

dale

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

10 posted 2003-08-25 01:51 PM

Our cyclical relationship to phenomenon has encouraged scholars to erase the
centers of periods, thus symbolizing the non-linear character of cause a

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