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Weakness |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Consumed and devoured good to the last drop These heavy thoughts Penalize Purely youth Sarcasm acquisitions And a mountain of gummey pride Grind apopletic sniffle Slow empty bones Hunger Draw in the roots of Evil This little light subject to change Head rush, Headache Focus In place Distraction and lost a trickle of music from a well |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Much enjoyed the freeform descriptive thoughts here, and always appreciate a poem with substance!!! Your style is deep, and causes one to actually think about what they've read...excellent!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Craig, nice lines: Hunger Draw in the roots of Evil it sure does . . . Nice to see you in Open . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (08-24-2003 08:46 AM).] |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx Sunnyone. Thanx littlewing, {I used a websters and accidently saw the word apopletic and decided to use it} GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahahah yw - I do that all the time, is the best cure indeed |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
yeah i believe so. a trickle of music from a well |
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