Open Poetry #28 |
To Dream You Into View |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
The trees stand tall like sentinels As they salute the morning sun There's so many signs from nature That new life has just begun You can almost hear a pin drop Upon the forest floor Here I am at one with nature With so much yet to explore The sun shines out across the valley On this early Summer's morn I breathe in the cool clean air And I feel like I'm reborn The birds call to each other Through the treetops way up high As they go about their business Before they take to the sky I close my eyes and imagine That I'm lying here with you As I try with all my might To dream you into view * * * "If I never would have met him, I would have dreamed him into being." I am in motion |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
"As I try with all my might To dream you into view" good write. |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
I'm in awe. Your descriptions are majestic, and the ending is so powerful. I know the feeling. Kielo I'll never forget you, even though I'm moving on.... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I close my eyes and imagine That I'm lying here with you As I try with all my might To dream you into view Sue...this is so lovely. Holding these words in my heart tonight for someone once I knew. A beautiful write... Patricia |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: This is a beautiful world you are describing and of course, you need someone to share it with, even if you have to dream. I know you really do have someone! Betty Lou Hebert |
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