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Bird Watch |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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"Do you have any bread," he says "What for," I ask, "You called them ugly and disgusting, wretched as the refuse they're doomed to walk the earth upon," "Maybe God should extinguish their unsightlyness just for you," I tell him. They reek from day old eggs, their webbed feet calloused from nails slivered glass and cigarettes they stumble on. "Maybe i should get them some bread," he says, feed just the pretty ones the little helpless ones. Well praise the lord! My heart does sing, maybe, just maybe, I'm wearing off on you, just a bit now, afterall. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-23-2003 07:40 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Just gotta rub yourself in, eh? |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - Well praise the lord! My heart does sing, maybe, just maybe, I'm wearing off on you, just a bit now, afterall. Yes, I'm sure that heart of yours can sing... BC |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
ohhhhhhhh my ~ what can i say? |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Well praise the lord! My heart does sing, maybe, just maybe, I'm wearing off on you, just a bit now, afterall. Maybe you are, Michele...maybe you are... which would be a good thing...  Hugs  Ethel |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Well, feeding the birds is one of my fav hobbies, so this one is a keeper for me! The last lines are absolutely perfect!!!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very good... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
*smile* m'dear, how can you not? xxoo |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
I'm wearing off on you, just a bit now, afterall. I think you got that right! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"maybe, just maybe, I'm wearing off on you," Smiling so big here right now after reading that line. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Aha, another bird lover. Smiling here, as I read this on a couple of levels. |
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