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Non-Profit Disorganization
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Non-Profit Disorganization |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Non-Profit Disorganization By: Noah Eaton 8/22/03 This is a message in a bottle to the speechless This is an S.O.S to the disproportionate Nature has long defied these white flags So what's with all this practical intuition That always leaks with infidelity? If my life was predetermined by astrology Then what is the use of bragging? Everyone would know you well all too soon Time to cover up all these lines And allow Nature to disorganize Can you blame your children for not cleaning their rooms? Someday I'll escape Expectation and wake To a verdictless wild dream Someday I'll look back On all this and laugh When it's valid to say nothing is as it seems It's time to establish this non-profit disorganization Time to build a levee to the final fantasy... Every Saturday Momma watches Trading Spaces Paints walls solid colors in all sorts of places And thumbs through the wonders of Feng Shui She always works at a strenuous pace Time elapses, then comes a day When her own mind seems untidy and ran astray... If my life was predetermined by astrology Then what is the use of bragging? Everyone would know you well all too soon Time to cover up all these lines And allow Nature to disorganize Can you blame your children for not cleaning their rooms? Someday I'll escape Expectation and wake To a verdictless wild dream Someday I'll look back On all this and laugh When it's valid to say nothing is as it seems It's time to establish this non-profit disorganization Time to build a levee to the final fantasy... When my room is unkempt and dirty At least it makes me feel at home Why do you suppose everyone gets bored constantly And before you know it your children get old? So I'll drive this Mystery Machine into this enigma And go with the flow... If my life was predetermined by astrology Then what is the use of bragging? Everyone would know you well all too soon Time to cover up all these lines And allow Nature to disorganize Can you blame your children for not cleaning their rooms? Someday I'll escape Expectation and wake To a verdictless wild dream Someday I'll look back On all this and laugh When it's valid to say nothing is as it seems It's time to establish this non-profit disorganization Time to build a levee to the final fantasy... . . . . . . . . All you are looking for Is always in the last place you look... . . . . . All you are looking for Is always in the last place you look... I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (08-22-2003 11:55 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Someday I'll escape Expectation and wake To a verdictless wild dream Someday I'll look back On all this and laugh When it's valid to say nothing is as it seems and before you know it your children get old~ Noah, what sign are you anyway? How deeply you go, only to leave me between tears. I hope you're well Dear Noah~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - your writes are always you, excellent... BC |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is..amazing.. Breathtaking.. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Quite a collage of truths, observations, contemplations, and wisdoms. Anyone ever tell you that you're an old soul? And I like the closing lines... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'd like to echo Mark's wonderful reply! Noah, you are amazing! Your mind is as big as your heart!--and that is saying a great deal. You wear so many hats as a poet--romantic, social activist, educator, philosopher, lyricist, adventurer, spiritulist, naturist...the list goes on and on! Love ya, Angel Man! EA |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
Wow... This is excellent.... just awesome.  Well done!Kielo |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Someday I'll escape Expectation and wake To a verdictless wild dream Someday I'll look back On all this and laugh When it's valid to say nothing is as it seems It's time to establish this non-profit disorganization Time to build a levee to the final fantasy... . . . . . . . . All you are looking for Is always in the last place you look... . . Dear Noah...my friend... You have out-done yourself with this one. Absolutely wonderful work!!!!  Hugs  Ethel |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Excellently penned! An awesome write! As your last line states, the solution would be to look in the last place ~~ FIRST! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
quote: AHA! now I know where to look for my sanity! LOL. Loved this write Noah, it's truthful, and full of a open degree of honesty not often seen. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I love your talent, little brother, and the way you always fill my mind with thoughts to ponder!!!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Nicely done Noah. A  lucky |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"If my life was predetermined by astrology Then what is the use of bragging?" Please keep in mind that we ALL have a free will, thus astrology does not rule our decisions in life. Great write here Noah. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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