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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? 
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to take the dry route.. blood was thicker than water.. now many of my family has made the departure confused by a war tactic...divide and conqueor our family used to be tight and bounced back from bullshit like elastic the dynasty falls due to over reaction and drastic dramatics its gramatic how we can specify verbal linguistics and fight over simple logistics were all orphan children <-- cause my family is non existant so close but yet so distant think of the history... we displayed original styles... we fit no predetermined profile and we ran [edited] for a while now were debris... <-- destroy, rebuild and recycle how many times do we have to go thru this cycle new beginnings with the same ending I.S. has met its ending.. whos still [edited] pretending our name was like a label legendary like unicorns, pots of gold & fables i laid all my cards face up on the table like poker but once you fold and get out the game... its game over [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-27-2003 08:38 AM).] |
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Suede Junior Member
since 2003-08-25
Posts 38Drifting on the soul |
Oh my god, this was excellent. I could feel everthing transcribed. Such a delight to read, but pain to understand. Brilliant As forever is always - Suede [This message has been edited by Suede (08-26-2003 09:11 AM).] |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
appreciated the feedback suede <-- did u knwo i love thattype of leather... smooth..... thanx for the feedback |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I think this needs to go back to the front so it will get the attention it deserves. I especially liked LINE 5...this is a very descriptive piece...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Very descriptive here and I enjoyed. Crystal |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
up again |
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