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GreenChaos New Member
since 2003-08-21
Posts 2 |
What was to be a renaissance Is now but a stillbirth Tall brick walls have been built The mind's eye has been sewn shut The powers that be made this decree Uniformity is to prevail Blood...only one shade of red. Sun...only one shade of yellow. Grass...only one shade of green Ocean...only one shade of blue. All dynamic has been cleansed The soul of existence has been reaped Those who wander off the beaten path Are put inside four walls Confined away from our realm of reason To bring orgasmic pleasure to the vapid |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
excellent first post, toots~ welcome to PIP! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well done, GreenChaos - This is a great entree to Passions in Poetry. You've captured the contemporary mentality nicely... I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work... Check your email for a special greeting...  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
This is a very good start to your time with us here at PIP. WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!! Enjoy your stay. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Welcome to Passion's.I can tell from your write you'll love it here. Crystal |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BRAVO! You've an excellent beginning write here, and I will definitely seek more writings from you. Welcome to Passions!   |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
Great first write! Welcome to passions |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) This is a very powerful debut, dearest friend, it too troubles me deeply that many still are forced to be incarcerated to protect the many left of us, for I believe the key to making harmony is to unite but not conform; to respect each other and what makes us special, which may not happen in a long time when things seem blasphemous or derogatory to one another! (sad sigh) Well done, dearest friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet GreenChaos, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wondrous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!    May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
 WELCOME!! |
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