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idonthaveaname
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since 2003-08-19
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0 posted 2003-08-19 01:38 AM



a sunrise softly spoken
but there's nothing much to say
angrily awoken
on this third calendar day

so i guess this must be reason
and i guess this must be rhyme
an emotional dry season
an emptiness sublime

well lets not waste a second
there's so much not to do
i remeber love, i reckon
now our lonely hearts debut

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-08-19 01:50 AM


ahhh this one burns . . .

Welcome to PIP!
You will find many friends who
can relate to this
nice entrance
xxoo

Ratleader
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
2 posted 2003-08-19 01:54 AM


Keep this up, and you'll have a name real soon....... a nice first post -- welcome aboard!

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-08-19 02:00 AM


Great first post, dahling..

Welcome to PIP

idonthaveaname
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since 2003-08-19
Posts 15

4 posted 2003-08-19 02:43 AM


thanks for the kind words...
Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 165
on the moon
5 posted 2003-08-19 04:10 AM


hey! glad to see u here... i enjoyed this, keep it up, i will love to see more
~Talia

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
6 posted 2003-08-19 07:35 AM


Welcome to Passions in Poetry, oh nameless one.  This is a wonderful place to share your work and enjoy reading others.  Settle in and have fun.

Check your email for a special greeting...

minoune
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since 2003-08-10
Posts 87
Canada
7 posted 2003-08-19 08:22 AM


:0))))  beautiful....

minoune

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
8 posted 2003-08-19 08:40 AM


Welcome to Passions In Poetry!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
9 posted 2003-08-19 08:46 AM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I know you will love it here.
Looking forward to your next post.
~Summertime Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

JustALonelyBuni
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since 2003-08-19
Posts 3
CT, US
10 posted 2003-08-19 09:21 AM


all i can say is...whoa...
gringakiwi
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since 2003-08-05
Posts 189

11 posted 2003-08-19 09:26 AM


Nice one, nameless.... very cool indeed. Welcome!
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
12 posted 2003-08-19 10:03 AM



Ah ... I would call you poet~

Welcome to Passions~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
13 posted 2003-08-19 10:10 AM


I'm glad I came by today so I could catch this one. It leaves me breathless.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
14 posted 2003-08-19 12:18 PM


"well lets not waste a second
there's so much not to do"

That is a great poetic statement!

Welcome to PiP!

bslicker
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state of mind
15 posted 2003-08-20 11:56 AM


Welcome

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
16 posted 2003-08-20 12:40 PM


great write! welcome to passions. i look forwad to hearing more from you

take care.
Amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
17 posted 2003-08-20 12:50 PM


Hi, there __________ ! lol I didn't no whether to laugh or cry when I saw that your name was a no name which actually is a name!

"well lets not waste a second
there's so much not to do"

Your sense of humor shines through your pain. Sounds like you found this new home-away-from-home, in the nick of time.
Did your relationship end three days ago?
Hang in there. Write and we'll read and we'll support you!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

Mistletoe Angel
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18 posted 2003-08-26 11:26 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is a beautifully heartaching debut, sweet friend, I understand the ache and I send angel hugs your way to help you embrace the sunrise with hope this time around and beyond, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your splendid poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
19 posted 2003-08-26 11:28 PM


Don't know how I missed this but I did...
oh wait, now I remember...I have kids running out my ears over here and was probably knee deep in homework, or supper dishes!

WELCOME TO PASSIONS my friend....look forward to reading more of your work!

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
20 posted 2003-08-26 11:29 PM


Welcome to passions

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