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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2003-08-03 10:13 PM

Two Story Tent

Living in me is
like living in
a two story tent.

Why climb up there?
If I do, I’ll still be
down here, but with
a layer of cloth
in the way.

[This message has been edited by Ratleader (08-03-2003 10:14 PM).]

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-08-03 10:43 PM

thinner than the walls i build

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-08-03 11:50 PM

Crack the membrane...you may surprised what you find. Good one!!!!!!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-08-03 11:58 PM

Man, Ed......you are on a roll tonight!!

And, I love the idea of a
two story tent!! LOL

Hugs

Ethel

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-08-04 12:09 PM

Ed...Think of all the storage space you have! What was in that orange juice you drank...you are smile maker this evening.

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
Senior Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho

5 posted 2003-08-04 01:35 AM

Sounds like rosemary pinning up sheets... catchy Ratleader.

dale

lucky
Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 1601
Idaho

6 posted 2003-08-04 01:42 AM

oops,

using my wife's name again... Sorry 'bout that.

dale

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2003-08-04 11:50 AM

I love this! *S* The image of a two story tent is a striking one... (I just have to curb my dirty lil mind when I get to that layer of cloth in the way line. *G* It does lead to a different interpretation! LOL)

Partitions never do help with living in our own skin, do they? *S* Excellent work!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2003-08-04 12:32 PM

why climb up there...I agree Ed

M

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2003-08-04 02:19 PM

me thinks you need a condo on the beach

clever write poet sir...your muse has been hot of late.

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-08-05 04:15 AM

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

11 posted 2003-08-30 12:09 PM

Another beauty that I missed somehow....

God, this was awesome m'friend!

You are a wizard with words!

)))hugs(((

Tima

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

12 posted 2003-08-31 03:30 AM

Oh yes...I am familiar with that tent, but have come to think of the next layer as another place to store my treasures!!! Much enjoyed...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

13 posted 2003-08-31 05:11 AM

Would you mind sending me the recipe to that O.J you had Ed?

I want me some of this magic.

Enjoyed muchly and yes that cloth certainly plays naughty with the mind

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

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