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Open Poetry #28

...Forget

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-08-31 02:19 AM

bend with me..

there is a real you.

droplets of
reflection..
i splash myself aside.

i don't want to
look in
my own eyes..

bend..
tender skin
i bleed you out.

remind me
again why
it rains
everytime
i cry..

i touched you,
and still
my breathing makes
no difference in your wind..

there's nothing
blind of reason..
you've left your mind
unopen..

so
on you i will
give up..
I will
survive this..

I will
dry the tears of
forget.

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2003-08-31 02:21 AM

remind me
"again why
it rains
everytime
i cry..

i touched you,
and still
my breathing makes
no difference in your wind.."

every time i read you i feel like quiting

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2003-08-31 02:22 AM

"droplets of
reflection..
i splash myself aside"

I love this part....

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-08-31 02:23 AM

Meghan...I swear, every poem I read
from you is better than the last.
This is simply wonderful, and I love it.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

4 posted 2003-08-31 03:38 AM

I like this. I think i inderstand it better than most previous. Although they all seem to have a slight simliarity. I dont know if that statement was a good one or bad one but Im going to leave it.

Craig

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2003-08-31 05:06 AM

"tears of forget" ..... I like that.

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

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