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Open Poetry #28

Mended Hearts

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2003-08-20 03:27 PM

Mended Hearts

when not near you
the heart fells empty
no words will ever mend
thoughts of the mind actions

love from hearts
building an army of feelings
over-coming enemies of mind thoughts
listening together only hearts.
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Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2003-08-20 10:03 PM

sweet poem... keep it up

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-08-21 05:24 PM

"over-coming enemies of mind thoughts"

so very hard to do, Bernie.

M

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-09-07 03:48 PM

Bernie, this is sad, but sweet.

Hugs

Ethel

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-09-07 06:21 PM

This has sadness, but the sweetness overtakes it.

Crystal

SweetSerenity
Member

since 2003-02-16

Posts 52
Canada

5 posted 2003-09-07 06:30 PM

I enjoyed this little poem.
Good job and I look forward to reading some more of your work.

~A touch of Sweetness . . . . . A lifetime of Serenity~

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