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Amature2
Member

since 2001-01-08

Posts 416

0 posted 2003-08-21 09:01 AM

Tear Drops

I
.
let
.
my Tear
.
Drops fall off
.
my face. Hoping

they carry my pain
with them into the
depth of darkness
where sadness
belongs.

"Due to budget cuts, the light at the end of the tunnel, has been turned off" author unknown

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (08-21-2003 09:03 AM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-08-21 09:03 AM

The ending was quite a punch..

But, where would we be without sadness?..

Much like, how can silence be eloquent if we fear it?

Still, though I ponder, this write was amazing.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-08-21 09:15 AM

So sad. It's too bad tears couldn't wash it all away.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

3 posted 2003-08-21 09:41 AM

Oh wow. I really enjoyed this.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2003-08-21 11:19 AM

Amature2 - and when they fall to the ground may they disappear. Best to you...

BC

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2003-08-21 12:14 PM

enjoy your read

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-09-07 03:51 PM

I love the form you wrote this teardrop
in. Really beautiful.

Hugs

Ethel

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-09-07 06:15 PM

I love the form and wiht the release of your teardrops will be the flourish of sunshine and happiness.

Crystal

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-09-07 06:28 PM

brilliant presentation, and thoughts. they belong there, yet they remain, stained upon our cheeks.

hugs

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