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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-08-19 10:09 AM

Instructions fail me
blot the wound

answers never come

I
never
stay
healed

Look at those weapons
so uninspiring

forget, move on, fight

I
will
not
follow

the beckoning hand
of pretend

for I never understand

until
you
shoot
silence

standstill heart nods
in your direction

speak, speak, speak.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2003-08-19 10:12 AM

Quite lovely. I like the arrangement, it adds to the impact of the words.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-08-19 10:17 AM

gemjop
Well done my dear. Enjoyed

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-08-19 10:22 AM

silence oh how I will never gravate towards silence again....

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-08-19 10:25 AM

Your style of writing causes the reader to think along the way. I enjoy the brain workouts! lol

You have such an interesting and unique way of presenting your thoughts!

Loves & hugs & smiles,
LL

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-08-19 10:27 AM

You always impress me with your, style, substance and beauty.
Eric

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2003-08-19 11:36 AM

I
never
stay
healed
I
will
not
follow
until
you
shoot
silence

those lines alone say volumes... here hoping your heart indeed finds mend and solace soon.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-08-19 11:57 AM

Linda is right, you do give the brain a workout...but it's always great exercise...well done, m'dear...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-08-19 12:00 PM

Hey little Gemma

I don't know where you were for a few days, but I sure am glad you're back.

I missed you Lovey...

Hugs

Ethel Mae

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-08-19 12:47 PM

until
you
shoot
silence

but it may be the loudest shot of all, if you want to still hear something....
like the arrangement , ditto to e.angel

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

10 posted 2003-08-19 12:49 PM

agh..this one is perfect.

insanity is not a crime

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

11 posted 2003-08-19 12:51 PM

"answers never come"

ah, so many times i have felt this way. i keep thiking they will...anyways beautiful wirte

"in a past life i was a woodcarver's knife: the sharpend blade of a wood cutter, the eldest son of the chief's brother: a maker of drums"

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2003-08-19 01:16 PM

gem - maybe I am wayy off here, but ohhh I know this silence, I do. See it in his eyes every other day or so and it drives me mad! grrrr . . . yes you always reach out and grab my heart, you do
xxoo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2003-08-19 01:42 PM

I
never
stay
healed

aye you know i know this..hugs

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