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Open Poetry #28

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-08-19 01:52 PM

Stitch by stitch
I watched the needle
passing through time,
curtained to hide the truth in me,
waiting to be hung
in a world of illusion,
a Renaissance, whose
style
becomes me.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-08-19 01:54 PM

a stitch in time makes eight? or something like that

good write and I loved the use of metaphors

insanity is not a crime

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-08-19 01:57 PM

Excellent write...much enjoyed this Maureen.
Love the pic as well.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-08-19 01:58 PM

Hi Liz. Actually I have been sewing curtains for the last week for a booth at the Renaissance Faire...so it is not only metaphor...but truth

Thank you
M

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-08-19 01:59 PM

Thank you Nancy *s

It's the way I like to see myself...even if dark and unsmiling.
hugs
M

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