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Sunshine

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0 posted 2003-08-02 08:15 AM

Golden Oldies

It’s a round ’n golden oldie day
I smiled at sun to hear her say
“lilies ring me round today”
for it’s a yellow day in play

August greets us with o’blige
and I would wonder its perceive
that soon a fall shall color leaves
as gold would let us all believe

that in the round of oldies gold
as music’s life would stand us bold
a lily fresh keeps me from old
just as love’s within my hold

it’s a round ’n golden oldie day
for it’s a yellow day in play

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-02-2003 08:18 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-08-02 08:19 AM

Sunshine
Lovely,

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2003-08-02 08:24 AM

For some reason, Cat Stevens' song "Morning Has Broken" plays in my mind after having read this smiling tribute to a positive day...

-MVS

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2003-08-02 08:32 AM

Yes, I agree with Mark and the song...
beautiful Karilea...and this reads like as song.
~Summertime Smiles~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2003-08-02 09:25 AM

Sunshine - a lovely write. August is great but geez, we would sure like to see some rain up here...

BC

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5 posted 2003-08-02 09:31 AM

I have always planted Day Lilies in my gardens!--along with irises! The rich sun-yellow color is a joy to behold--as was this glorious poem!

Have a wonderful day!
Linda

Patricia
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6 posted 2003-08-02 11:20 AM

Oh...I love how this reads and the way its echo remains in my mind. Smiling and shaking my head in awe of you. Lovin' that rhyme, Ms. Karilea!

Patricia

QjQ
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7 posted 2003-08-02 12:26 PM

terrific,,,

Duncan
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8 posted 2003-08-02 12:56 PM

"it’s a round ’n golden oldie day
for it’s a yellow day in play"

Cool....a yellow day!!!!! Wonder if the mini brat has seen this one??? Thanks for the morning sunshine Sunshine!!

skyshine

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9 posted 2003-08-02 02:37 PM

August does have a golden feel to it...very beautiful, Karilea!

~Elizabeth

Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone...
~Jewel

garysgirl

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10 posted 2003-08-02 02:52 PM

This fits you and your sunshine
beautifully, Karilea.

Hugs

Ethel

Margherita
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Eternity

11 posted 2003-08-02 05:02 PM

You made me see the yellow magic.
Lovely!
Hugs. Margherita

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

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12 posted 2003-08-02 10:01 PM

Karilea,
what form is this?
it is a beautiful sing-songy rhythm
I love it!
xxoo

El_Campeador
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13 posted 2003-08-04 03:44 PM

I love daffodils... A golden oldie day sounds like just the day for me!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

passing shadows
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14 posted 2003-08-05 04:14 AM

very bright

VOE
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15 posted 2003-08-05 04:56 AM

And now I expect to see you running through a field of wildflowers, adding a tune to these wonderful lyrics!!!! ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

inkedgoddess
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16 posted 2003-08-05 06:39 AM

it’s a round ’n golden oldie day
for it’s a yellow day in play

its a bit of both and it keeps us going
nice words and bright thoughts here

suthern

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17 posted 2003-08-05 10:46 AM

What a delight this is... uplifts both spirits and corners of mouth. *S*

SharaRose
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18 posted 2003-08-05 10:58 AM

So pretty.....what a blessing to have this surround you. Lovely!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Marshalzu

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19 posted 2003-08-05 05:47 PM

This is just so absolutely beautiful and joyful, thanks for sharing it with us

Andy

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