Open Poetry #28 |
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On the Mountaintop |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I delight in the breeze That carries clouds over trees And crowd them beneath my feet; I yearn for the moonlight That rises deep into the night Making the sky viewing complete. On the morning I leave that place Slowly going across the stone face Leaving the thin air so cool Back down the rugged pathway Then sit under the sun at noonday Beside the calmness of a pool; I can but visit here so rare To climb atop the rough stair And give my eye a natural feast; So much beauty it has to give I long there to forever live And be the mountain’s priest. Gloom Inspired by the writings of Po Ch-i (772-846) China |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I wanna go there too -- I miss it, here in the flats of Southern Cal. Thanks for this little visit. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, ratleader, Seems like a nice lifestyle, living on the mountain Worshipping the natural beauty. I am pleased you liked this. I suggest you head for the Mountains when you can Gloom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Such a lift as this gives... thank you, Professor! |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I delight in the breeze That carries clouds over trees And crowd them beneath my feet; Every bit of this filled me with calm, and beautiful images. ![]() thankyou Aszhard. love gem xx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Sunshine, Glad you liked this, a little inspiration from my Chinese friends Unfortunately they all lived in the 600’s and all I can do Is minor imitations of their poetry. Thank you, gemjop, It is a pleasant place I’m sure The poem comes from the Po Ch-I’s Chung-nan Mountain, A retreat he went to and got away from the rigors of his life. Gloom |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoy this style...beautiful silky flow...James |
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