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TWENTY OR LESS...#149
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TWENTY OR LESS...#149 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
TWENTY OR LESS…#149 Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon Nubile temptress ravaged by her taut charms bathed in her consuming haze she’ll arrive when time begs end You CAN make a difference: |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You continue to amaze...with twenty of less! Eric |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Wow! You sure can understand the passion of the passionate so well, dearest friend, there can always be quite some circumstance when the consumption comes in like that, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
*smiling at you* Love this! ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Such a lusty poem....and in less than 20 -- hope that only applies to syllables.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Eric: It's mutual though the form be different. Thank you, Sir. Noah: Just one of the delicacies in life... Nancy, I thought you might, you enchantress you...  Ratleader:  In such matters, there is no limit... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
when time begs end... yes... well done Mark..tight, concise and yet so open as to let the reader draw their own images... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I so loved every word of this.The passion and heart lights the reader on fire. You are an amazement to the eye.  Crystal |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mark - you are the ultimate writer of these 20 or less. I enjoy every one... BC |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Ron: ...an invitation to interpretation... Thank you, Crystal! So nice to be appreciated -- thank you, Bill. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
romantic, patient, captivating, sensual, giving, accepting, and allowing...wonderful write! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
LeeJ: Key ingredients to make a good recipe work... -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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