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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-08-17 06:18 PM


TWENTY OR LESS…#149

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


Nubile temptress

ravaged by her
taut charms

bathed in her

consuming haze

she’ll arrive
when time begs end


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© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2003-08-17 08:04 PM


You continue to amaze...with twenty of less!
Eric

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2 posted 2003-08-17 08:26 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Wow! You sure can understand the passion of the passionate so well, dearest friend, there can always be quite some circumstance when the consumption comes in like that, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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3 posted 2003-08-17 08:51 PM


*smiling at you*
Love this!

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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4 posted 2003-08-17 11:20 PM


Such a lusty poem....and in less than 20 -- hope that only applies to syllables....

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MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2003-08-18 03:01 AM


Eric:  It's mutual though the form be different.  Thank you, Sir.

Noah:  Just one of the delicacies in life...

Nancy, I thought you might, you enchantress you...

Ratleader:     In such matters, there is no limit...

-MVS

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6 posted 2003-09-17 10:21 AM


when time begs end... yes...
well done Mark..tight, concise and yet so open as to let the reader draw their own images...


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7 posted 2003-09-18 02:32 AM


I so loved every word of this.The passion and heart lights the reader on fire. You are an amazement to the eye.
Crystal

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8 posted 2003-09-18 10:32 AM


Mark - you are the ultimate writer of these 20 or less. I enjoy every one...

BC

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2003-09-18 10:36 AM


Ron:  ...an invitation to interpretation...

Thank you, Crystal!

So nice to be appreciated -- thank you, Bill.

-MVS

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http://educate-yourself.org/

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10 posted 2003-09-18 11:03 AM


romantic, patient, captivating, sensual, giving, accepting, and allowing...wonderful write!
MARK V SHELDON
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11 posted 2003-09-19 12:20 PM


LeeJ:  Key ingredients to make a good recipe work...

-MVS

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