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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Sit up for me! Spin time for me! Jump hoops for me! Play tricks for me! Flashy gratitude Broadway attitude, only future, lonely present, empty platitude. Write a poem for me! Play with me! Come nap with me! Run away with me! Promised ecstasy endless fantasy, no substance, no meaning, no reality. ©2003 by icebox |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (06-22-2003 02:56 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Bad Day? Sometimes I just need to be left alone too. Understanding this perfectly. It's like being pecked to death by chickens.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Laughing at Karen.... YES, I relate well. with two children, 13 and 10.... I have felt these frustrations.. Thanx Ice, yet another crafty write you have given us. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
With each of your poems I read, I am in awe! Thank you for being here. Hugs, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Or....you could take the rest of the day off and relax!!!  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ya know...3 teens...18, 17 and 15. A year or two ago, I felt obligated to send the sheriffs department a christmas card...and the shrink..the judge....geez things were a mess then...LMAO..but it's all better now...but I know that chicken pecking feeling well.. Icybaby..the way you write... Susan |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Ah! But your write made it REAL! And, got it out of the system! Well penned! Blessings! Shirl 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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Bonfirelight Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 85London, England |
thats great. the words roll off each other like leaves tumbling off a tree in autumn. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Iceman, I think we all come here to try to get away, sometimes, don't we? It's bad, though, when it doesn't work, and the aggravations just keep pecking away!!LOL Good write, as always!! LOL Hugs  Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Well. Ice... I understand this one... nicely done bud. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmm! I was just wondering, is this what "performance anxiety" is all about? tehe  I'm always intrigued by your writing. Warm hugs, EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Everyone applause with me-- to your great write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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