Open Poetry #27 |
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The Bottomless Kansas Summer Blues |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Done put some rogaine on my tires, all four were nearly bald, I got the bottomless Kansas summer blues, an idiot I have been called, But it don't bother me a bit, 'cause the woman I am to marry, Says she cares not a diddly-squat, if my wheels are hairy, I met her in the parking lot, down at the Piggly-Wiggly, I got the bottomless Kansas summer blues, she makes my eyes go squiggly, She's a gem, a beauty rare, without her life would suck, I'll keep her til the day I die, oh how I love that truck, Now my girlfriend she is pretty too, but a four-wheel she is not, I got the bottomless Kansas summer blues, but I like her too, a lot, I checked my tires and they're still bald, I'm feeling kind of blue, That's why I got the bottomless Kansas summer blues, I hope that you don't too. [This message has been edited by Tim (06-22-2003 02:48 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have a special fondness for any poem that incorporates "Piggly Wiggly" in the text. Thanks for the smiles Tim. I've HEARD about those summertime blues. People say it's pretty hot here in New Orleans--I wouldn't know though, I don't plan on going outside until September. ![]() |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ROTFLMFO...you guys and your trucks.... Tell me, Tim, does your truck outrun the flying cottonwood? |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, guys and trucks, big boys and toys... Love the humor in this....thanx Tim.. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Hey -- a man's truck is a sacred thing ladies -- ![]() I'll have to admit Tim -- I never thought of using Rogaine... is it cheaper than retreads? Nice to read your poetry instead of duking it out in the alley for a change. ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Now my girlfriend she is pretty too, but a four-wheel she is not, I got the bottomless Kansas summer blues, but I like her too, a lot, Bet that makes her day!!! ![]() Fun poem, great write Tim~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool stuff here...like this |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good write about the ole truck!!!!!! A voice of honesty |
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timothysangel1973![]()
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Hey...I'm with Serenity on the "Piggly-Wiggly" verse, I live in a one red-light town, and guess what the only grocery store is for forty miles....YEP...The Pig! I loved this...very amusing, and light-hearted! ![]() ...The truck thing I understand, my husband would sleep in his if he could...(well, he could've plenty of nights...but I felt sorry for him...haha) |
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