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Bitter Fantasy |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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Love what does it mean to me? how can it be so nice,when all i get is broken dreams? Endless thoughts,with good intentions,something i thought was real is unraveling. should of just hung up this pipedream of mine. to think that love could visit me again no not this time, not even then.... Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
think with common sense,,, it always worked for me... you expressed this write well,,, A voice of honesty |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thank you very much. but,its very hard to think with common sence when your in so much pain at sometimes. Life is very complex,and im sure I'll get through it one way or another. my poetry always makes me see things clear in the morning. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... [This message has been edited by Foxyoasis (06-28-2003 02:15 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
yeah sometimes writing about a problem can help you can see the problem better,, i have did that all so,,, A voice of honesty |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write.... Common sense is over rated....  Follow your heart, take a chance....better to have loved and lost to have have never loved at all....yeah right, whomever wrote that obviously never got his heart crushed.... P.S. sent you email about using my poem I enjoyed this one! Tima C |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
my heart never got crushed because i used common sense,,,, A voice of honesty |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
well everyone gets their heart crushed sooner or later. then youl realized what we are yapping about LoL Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
lol  A voice of honesty |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
...Let me rephrase myself...Common sense is a great thing to have..., I didn't mean to step on what QjQ said, all I meant was that sometimes we over analize a situation and miss out on something wonderful! And hey...who hasn't had their heart crushed, or suffered from some romantic dissapointment? Ain't that why most of us are here? ...Sorry QjQ if I offended you (didn't mean to) |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
no way timothysangel1973 i was only trying to give Foxyoasis some thoughts to think about,,, nothing or no one offends me!! i'm to dayumm old for that,,, lol have a nice day,,, A voice of honesty |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
I appreciate your words I'm a young 21 year old. and im stupid sometimes. Id be the first to admit it heheFool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
never say stupid,,, just inexperienced my dear!!! love has no rules or schooling for one to learn,, only experience can guide you,, A voice of honesty is treasured more than voices of flattery QjQ [This message has been edited by QjQ (06-28-2003 04:42 AM).] |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
well experince sucks  coz sometimes it hurts Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very true!!! A voice of honesty |
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