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Open Poetry #27

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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-06-22 02:38 PM

Golden pride
hushes me
~I know~

Silver tongue
should be cut
~I feel~

Rainbow blue
festering words
~I taste~

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-06-22 02:51 PM

Ebony
envelopes me
I think.

Interesting stuff here, leads me to, well, THINK.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2003-06-22 02:53 PM

Imagine Karen thinking...hmmm, this little
ditty does indeed cause that to happen...
to more than just her...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-06-22 02:55 PM

gemma . . . this is palpable
awesome and bitter
sweet
xxoo

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-06-22 08:53 PM

Talented poetess
Impresses me
~ I know!

Huggums sweetums!
EA

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

5 posted 2003-06-22 08:57 PM

I think you did a 20 or less...with some remarkable aplomb. Well done, Gemma.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-06-22 11:51 PM

loved this

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-06-23 08:48 AM

yep, very cool write

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-08-10 11:50 PM

I know and I see!-- this is a great write!

ARCTIC WIND

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