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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-06-22 05:48 PM

Passage of Time

I miss you.
I yearn to kiss you
until the end of time.
Feeling the pleasure
of your sweet lips
brushing softly against
the pleasure of mine.
Caressing your beautiful
face within the passion
of loves silky embrace.

Come to me my sweet.
Give me my silky treat.
You are my precious thrill.
Do with me what you will.
Our love will improve
like a fine aged wine
with each shared kiss
in the passage of time.

JamesLee
June22
2003

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-22 06:14 PM

This is really pretty, James.
A very good poem.

Hugs

Ethel

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-06-22 06:34 PM

one finds the other half of self within that special love...beautiful thoughts and write

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-06-23 01:23 AM

(sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I just love the analogy to a fine wine, imaginer what it will taste like another century from now, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2003-06-23 02:46 AM

Reminds me of the song "Time In A Bottle"
Which happens to one of my favorites!

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

5 posted 2003-06-23 03:20 AM

"Do with me what you will."

Whewwww, that one could get ya into some trouble....HaHa

Great write!

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-06-23 05:44 AM

Thank you garysgirl, LeeJ, Noah, Romantic Heart and Tima for the nice responses.
Tima I certainly hope so...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-06-23 08:11 AM

nice!

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-06-23 08:18 AM

i think, this is my favourite of yours yet mr!

silky and free flowing.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2003-06-23 08:54 AM

James
This is really nice!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2008-08-10 11:51 PM

Lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

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