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A Spit of Ire
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A Spit of Ire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Spit of ire My soul turns on a spit of ire And rotates on a pit of fire The odor overwhelms my day It shades the sun to shadow gray. Each rotate shrinks the core to brown The dripping grease paint me a clown And thought I simmer in times stew I cannot bring the stew to view. I splutter in the heat of try Smoke and hiss each sound of sigh Twist and turn apocalypse And cannot stand one-upmanship The agony makes muse and smile And colors every source of wile And though I Braille a morn of dew I fail to do what I must do I know what is the end to come But who would beat this fetid drum? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The agony makes muse and smile And colors every source of wile And though I Braille a morn of dew I fail to do what I must do I know what is the end to come But who would beat this fetid drum? from life's most difficult trials comes the best of poems...the deepest You fail nothing my friend, and maybe just maybe your doing exactly what you are supposed to do...only you know...such is life in the moment...and the significance of you. Captive creation....smiles and hugs |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As I know we're going to be fixing ribs for supper tonight, I couldn't help but grin at some of the similarities...  Where's that dandy Randy, Sy? Methinks you need some raspberry tea from a Moth...or three!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My goodness Stinky...I see Randy is writing again...did he have chipsandbeer? LOL Something gave him heartburn and made him cranky.  But thru all his smoke and hell fire... I still find the classic Sy line of humilty and hope... And though I Braille a morn of dew Thats me Stinky  *ww*   No matter what the differences |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love the morning thoughts Sy! Tea is on and the sky is blue.. I'm always smiling with thoughts of you! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you for the sage and clever reply. JM, Well if I don't collect mornings dew, how are we going to make raspberry tea? Good morning Tink WWRS Sinshine, You never cease to shine. Nancy, Be right there dear. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Twist and turn apocalypse And cannot stand one-upmanship i enjoyed these lines,,, a very good write... A voice of honesty |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
QjQ Thank you for the read and reply. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, there is nothing fetid about you, your poetry or much else that I am aware of. Have you beeen hiding something?? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This read puzzles me to-day Seymour. Did Randy's fire burn down and he woke up on the wrong side of the bed? lol. I must ponder this one a little longer. Oh! Look! It's lunchtime already! Put the kettle on again Enchantress please. With raspberry tarts I am here to tease. Yummy. Have a wonderful Sunday my dear poet friend. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus Everyone has hidden dreams. LOL Chris, Ther is no one I'd rather have raspberry tarts with. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I splutter in the heat of try Smoke and hiss each sound of sigh Twist and turn apocalypse And cannot stand one-upmanship Your talent as a writer is something to admire, but it is the messages that you convey that mean so much. Wonderful, wonderful! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Even when you're down, your poetry soars. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade Thank you for the wonderful. suthern What a nice thing to say. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Seymour  I'm late today, but still glad to read you. I hope that you had a very good day, Sir.  Hugs to you, my friend  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hmm! Ya got me ta thinkin' ya don't look a bit like yer pic! --what with all the spittin' and rotatin', fetid odors, shrinking, brown core dripping grease!...Goodness, you're ruining my illusion of you!!! LOL  --but ya sure can write! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ah, Sy, it's always good for my soul to read your words. Hugs dear man ... Marti |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Hugs back and thanks for the read. Earth Angel, Sorry about that, I'll try and do better. Marti, And it's good for mine to read your replies. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good writing here |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I wish Seymour was still here with us all at pip!, I must say this was one of his good writes  ARCTIC WIND |
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