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Kaoru
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0 posted 2003-06-22 08:55 PM


I felt a sharp pain
Playful kittie bit my foot
Please, retract thy claws.

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2003-06-22 08:56 PM



Meghan, it's a good thing
LngJohnAg is not around...
he'd be kicking that kittie off your foot
for good!

So cute!

JilGirl
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2 posted 2003-06-22 10:29 PM


I felt your sharp pain, remembering
those sharp milk teeth and the needly claws!
Kittie scars on toes! Fonder memories of the darlings!

Good write!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

KoKo
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3 posted 2003-06-23 12:18 PM


lol this is so CUTE!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Startime55
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4 posted 2003-06-23 12:20 PM


Wow...I felt this one....*grin* I too have felt the sharp claws of a kitty attack...Well written...

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-06-23 09:00 AM


I once stayed at a friends house and as we watched movies on bigscreen in the dark i stumbled in the darkness and accidently stepped on his cats tail. The cat jumped up and sank its claws into my leg at which point i howled in pain and hurled the cat across the room..it was okay and i was okay but we never liked eachother after that
just thought I'd share that..i really should be in bed now

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (06-23-2003 09:00 AM).]

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-06-23 09:04 AM


hehehe...cute
Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-08-10 11:53 PM


I love cats, I have three little Furry ones myself!


ARCTIC WIND

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