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kirhar
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0 posted 2003-06-22 04:39 AM



A feeling that comes from so deep inside,
A feeling that I cannot describe.
An emotion you feel with all of your heart.
A feeling you feel even when your apart.
Nothing can change it, it's so deep inside.
It's rooted inside you, it cannot hide.
This feeling is love,it beats with your heart.
It beats on strong, stronger tham life.

© Copyright 2003 Kirsten Hardway - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-22 04:41 AM


Kirsten, just beautiful!


Welcome to Passions! looking forward to more of your writing!

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-06-22 04:49 AM


Kristen:
Welcome to PIP!
Nice entrance
You have beautifully penned
this indeed
Please check your email for a special greeting from everyone here at Passions!
xxoo

WindSong
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3 posted 2003-06-22 02:11 PM


This piece so true. Love is what you explained...Though I am younger then some who expierenced it, I know I have expierenced love and it rocks but all good things must come to an end, and that's why I find love to be great, but it hurts. Thanks for sharing this wonderous definition of love with me, and everyone else. Peace! ~*~kirah~*~
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4 posted 2003-06-22 02:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is a very precious debut, sweet friend, and I wish for loves magic to always pulse through your heart and soul, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kirsten, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kirsten, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-06-22 02:51 PM



Truth.  Welcome to Passions, Kirhar.  I will look forward to reading more of your poetry.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-06-22 03:06 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS KIRSTEN!
Wonderful entrance post here.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

timothysangel1973
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7 posted 2003-06-26 02:42 AM


Beautiful write!
Ceinwyn
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8 posted 2003-06-26 03:20 AM


welcome, enjoyed very heartfelt..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
9 posted 2003-06-26 06:46 AM


Welcome to passions, LOVED your LOVE poem!

A Romantic Heart

Artic Wind
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10 posted 2009-09-06 03:09 PM


Love is a stronger spiritual entity. ~ Very well done.
LOVED it lol


ARCTIC WIND

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