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speaking of the sea |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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speaking of the sea have you noticed it curl like toes do in the peak of an unimaginable infinite glee have you seen the waves swim one over another in a glide that is interspersed with froth that can only be matched (perhaps bettered) by the warm lather spawned in love’s embrace I have seen the sea curl and the waves swim like layers of silk while surfers slid over the arched back of the crimsoned queen so many times though, of late I experience pain in each moment of brief notice for the beauty of the scene puts me in a capsule that takes me back to crimson sunsets that inhabited the long evenings of admiring your pleasing presence alongside the pleased shadow of me the sea still dances and the waves churn their froth but our footprints on the sand have been washed away leaving the shadow widowed [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (06-19-2003 09:19 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! This is beautifully penned Sudhir! I so much enjoy your writing. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
but our footprints on the sand have been washed away leaving the shadow widowed ending lines that are to be envied... nice work my friend..I enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You speak so softly of the sea and as usual, you ended your poem on a memorable note. Luvs 'n hugs, EA |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Entrancing, Sudhir.....you have a voice that is unique, a style that's gentle but masculine, and a way of looking at things that is completely captivating. I've never seen a poem of yours that didn't make me glad I read it. This one particularly so, since I live near the sea, and those images resonate with things I see often. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
though, of late I experience pain in each moment of brief notice for the beauty of the scene puts me in a capsule that takes me back to crimson sunsets that inhabited the long evenings of admiring your pleasing presence alongside the pleased shadow of me Sudhir, this is the first poem I've read in Open this morning, and I am so glad. This is absolutely beautiful. I love the beach and that's what this reminded me of. Thanks, Ethel  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Thanks Sudhir... for bringing me the beach! Neeraja |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang Sudhir, this is so sad, my friend |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of your best Sudhir...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It's always such a pleasure to read your poetry, Sudhir. Really enjoyed this! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
quiet alive aware sad brilliant very nice Sudhir |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Sudhir, this sounds so sad, dearest friend, the waves can always erase the footprints left behind but the agate will always sparkle on the shores, with the memories of two lustrous eyes! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all so very much my kind friends... regards to each one of you, Sudhir |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
The beginning was perfect and really started off the poem with a great start. Wonderful write. ARCTIC WIND |
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