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dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

0 posted 2003-06-21 06:48 PM

The ocean swells
to create another wave
washing the shore in ecstacy
beating the rock into submission

Harnessing her energy
to experience the thrill
I ride the waves
on my longboard

From sunrise
to sunset
our stamina is tested
And I now long for tomorrow

[This message has been edited by dreambuilder (06-21-2003 09:20 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-06-21 07:18 PM

Great write dream..how i desperately need to feel some sand and dive into a wave..pisces ache this far out from sea

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-06-21 07:19 PM

Harnessing her energy
to experience the thrill
I ride the waves
on my longboard

ooohhh la la.......nice touch, dreamer dream on...
rafi, yes, fellow fishy wishy,,,,,,,i need that ocean too....its nice now no one out on the jshore..cept the rain and me

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-21-2003 07:21 PM).]

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

3 posted 2003-06-21 07:32 PM

Raph- I look forward to returning to my old hangouts - the surf is choice there in the winter

Inkedgoddess-this was inspired by you & your write (bloodless stone)
You seem to have truly understood this one
lol thank you for reading

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-06-21 07:47 PM

Great write!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-06-21 08:34 PM

Nice descriptive writing...James

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-22 12:35 PM

dream:

OUCH . . .
fingers burned by the keyboard
lol
awesome write and what a beautiful
extension of Michele's write.
Very nice indeed
xxoo

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2003-06-23 12:52 PM

You take me back...standing on the North Shore...watching those awesome waves...it truly is an amazing and beautiful sight.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-07-25 07:50 AM

The ocean swells
to create another wave
washing the shore in ecstacy
beating the rock into submission

yes, dreamy, looking in again at this,you
definitely took a bounce off me, didnt u?

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