Open Poetry #27 |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
We're too young and stupid to realize.. what's more important and loss.. isn't something I thought much about untill.. Well, I see a sunny day and I.. I don't really go outside at all. I'm falling..living too fast.. Wondering which day this week will I feel like I'm dying.. and there's not much else I can do ..but stay here, with you. I see a line of silk, keeping half of the things I worked so hard to aquire and I... stuck myself in a bottle, waiting to be released. I hear footsteps back and forth across my mind and .. well, I hold on..'cause I'm falling.. too fast to comprehend, that you were my only friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you have written my past here...and sometimes my present |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoying your writing, m'dear... |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
This is so sad. Greiving takes it's course and the sun will shine in time. Hugs Maggie |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I see a line of silk, keeping half of the things I worked so hard to aquire and I... stuck myself in a bottle, waiting to be released. I hear footsteps back and forth across my mind and .. well, I hold on..'cause I'm falling.. too fast to comprehend These words helped me a lot today, thanks. ~K~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sending you a healing potion that I blended myself, Dear Genie In A Bottle! EA |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
We're too young and stupid to realize.. what's more important and loss.. isn't something I thought much about untill.. Well, I see a sunny day and I.. I don't really go outside at all. There's quite a few lines of yours I'd wish I'd written but none more than these. I know this too well..the ssssun..it burnsssss..um ..yeah |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"and there's not much else I can do ..but stay here, with you." Oh yeah, been there, done that... Amazing... Susan C. |
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