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brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475
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0 posted 2003-07-24 02:51 AM



Sorry about this...
but these things start adding up
sigh


Watchers (a Kuhai)

the deer mark your passage through
statues of wisdom
no breath is drawn in their presence


Haitchoo!

air building tension
the full clouds are dark noses
wind, thunder, and rain


Airplane Advertising (paradelle)

eat
eat
Joe's
Joe's
Joe's
eat

at
at
food
food
food
at

cheap
cheap
good
good
good
cheap

eat
at
Joe's
good
food
cheap



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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2003-07-24 02:58 AM


you are just beautiful.



I've got a form I'd like ya to try...

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2003-07-24 03:00 AM



What?...you're 'sorry'?  Geez...

Don't ever apologize for posting your poetic thoughts, my friend.
I always enjoy reading them, and that includes these little bits from your 'junk' drawer,

And...LOL...I LOVE the paradelle!  That's great!

Glad you posted these, Brian.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

brian sites
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3 posted 2003-07-24 03:14 AM


smile
thank you love

and Vicky?
you are the best
thank you my friend

VOE
Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119
From the land of Camelot
4 posted 2003-07-25 05:18 AM


Now it was a pleasure to help you clean out your drawer, and especially since you shared this with us!!!  So, go ahead, and fill that drawer back up, pleeeeeese!!!!  ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2003-07-25 08:38 AM


LOL@Karen...form...


Hey this made me think of Cheap John's in Long Island, in the '80's, when big earrings where the thing...Cheap John's had the best...I miss the 80's....

Loved the peek into your...uh...drawer..

Susan C.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
6 posted 2003-07-25 07:49 PM


Thanks Bri - now I am starving for some venison in the rain
xxoo

Sunshine
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7 posted 2003-07-25 07:58 PM



I won't say I'm sorry
if you don't...

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
8 posted 2003-08-01 04:05 PM



...because everyone knows that 'junk'
is supposed to be recycled.

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

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